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Jamar Hightower was a government experiment that went wrong. In an attempt at rehabilitation of a Chicago City thug through mind radiation, The process goes bad for the C.I.A What is created is far beyond belief. Now Invisible to the world Jamar turns his hard core thug ways into a seductive passion. Becoming the vigilante of love, he showers the cities women with dream coJamar Hightower was a government experiment that went wrong. In an attempt at rehabilitation of a Chicago City thug through mind radiation, The process goes bad for the C.I.A What is created is far beyond belief. Now Invisible to the world Jamar turns his hard core thug ways into a seductive passion. Becoming the vigilante of love, he showers the cities women with dream come true experiences, find out is lust for passion a dream or a reality, and remember one thing, in your indeed of some thug loving, Don't forget to leave a window unlocked......

Title : invisible thug lover part 1
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ISBN : 15848092
Format Type : Kindle Edition
Number of Pages : 9 Pages
Status : Available For Download
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invisible thug lover part 1 Reviews

  • DENISE MOORE
    2018-12-13 20:29

    Don't have a titleIt's not like the story is bad but it's not something I would read if it was a full novel...it's an erotica for sure but I just don't want to sit and read stuff like this...

  • Rochelle Davis
    2018-11-20 21:26

    GoodThat was a great 8 page book i done ever read. There was three errors i found but still good. Wanted to know how he came about on what actually happened on being an experiment

  • Crown Jewelz
    2018-11-25 20:46

    Charles Burgess’, Invisible Thug Lover, is the first flash fiction story I’ve ever read. I wasn’t quite sure what to expect aside from what was mentioned in the synopsis. When I started reading, all I could think was, “Meet the man of your dreams,”−literally. The main character, Hightower, is exactly what the title describes, an invisible thug lover. The CIA tried to tame him, but he escaped their system and now lurks the streets of Chicago, finding female victims who he can seduce and offer unimaginable pleasure. Hightower is the ultimate lover, one who takes his time to discover his victims’ fantasies and likes.I will admit; I feel a little apprehensive about using the word victim. Hightower is not a rapist, but I viewed him as the man who comes to you in your dreams, the one who you believe is really there, fulfilling your wants and needs. Nevertheless, the real question is, does Hightower actually exist, or is he simply a figment of his victims’ imagination?With flash fiction and short stories, I often read complaints from readers feeling as if they never get enough of the story. With this particular piece, I believe you get everything you need (including a little bit on Hightower’s background), but the mystery surrounding whether Hightower is real or not, will leave you wanting more. Therefore, I’ve already one-clicked my way to Part II. The only thing I really hoped for in this story was a description of Hightower’s looks. The lack thereof didn’t impact the overall story because I simply envisioned Morris Chestnut to fill the void (LOL).For those of you who like quick, erotic, and descriptive stories, I highly recommend this work!

  • Kim BookJunkie
    2018-12-12 20:24

    I am still not quite sure what I just read about but I think it was supposed to be some type of ghost/paranormal/sci-fi erotica? Or maybe it was all a dream? Then again, maybe it was about a criminal who breaks into women's houses and sexually assaults them, justifying it to himself? I have absolutely no idea! The fact that I cannot determine what I just read is not the problem, it is kind of intriguing. What I found to be problematic was that there seemed to be some sentences missing. In the story, apparently both parties reach a climax but we only know that because the end result is described. Also, the ending is completely incongruent with the rest of the story.

  • Rhea Alexis Banks
    2018-11-27 21:32

    Invisible Thug Lover is a short, erotic, fantasy driven, delicious morsel that leaves you wanting more and delving into you own thoughts. This is my first read of flash fiction and the experience was good. Looking forward to part II.I give this experience 4 stars!!

  • Dominique Wilkins
    2018-11-22 22:41

    Charles gave great background and Chicago ties in his book throughout. I loved how he led you into the scene. I just preferred he stayed there a little longer because I am greedy! No worries, I have part 2. Time to go back in and wait for my Invisible Thug to show up again!!

  • Adrenna Shipman
    2018-12-02 20:52

    This quick read left me wanting yet another dose of this sexy dream lover. Quick and to the point, Mr Burgess has nailed another erotic flash fiction story that makes me want him to write a full story (hint hint). Way to go Mr Burgess. Mwah!!!

  • Andreana
    2018-12-04 21:37

    Next time I will wait til I'm at home to read

  • Dee Cherry
    2018-11-22 16:51

    Good quick read!

  • Juanesia
    2018-12-10 23:47

    I enjoyed this little flash fiction piece. There were a few errors and things that could have been avoided if it was a little more time taken. Not bad for a quickie read. On to the next part.

  • shamone norris
    2018-11-19 21:29

    Interesting....Very intimate and sexy short erotica story for quick fixes lol. Very original compared the usual erotica but I enjoyed it.

  • Felicia Savage
    2018-12-14 21:52

    I enjoyed this authors flow if the book and it was sexy